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From:
Andrew Christopher Hawk <andrew.hawk@blackburn.edu>
Subject:
Diff: Minor Improvement to Sentence
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tech@openbsd.org
Date:
Thu, 8 Aug 2024 05:18:41 +0000

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I was checking out dhcpleased(8)'s manual page, and a certain sentence
had me bugging out a bit, so I tried to fix up the sentence in
question.  The diff follows my signature.

I *also* made some other changes, but GitHub seems to *really* hate the
idea of combining diffs, and this system is low on disk space, so using
my local Git installation for this purpose seems to be right out.  In
the future, can I attach multiple commits in a single message, or should
I just aim to minimize the size of these messages?

Take care,
Andrew Christopher Hawk
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diff --git a/sbin/dhcpleased/dhcpleased.8 b/sbin/dhcpleased/dhcpleased.8
index 4b42b5639e6..e185fbc04e7 100644
--- a/sbin/dhcpleased/dhcpleased.8
+++ b/sbin/dhcpleased/dhcpleased.8
@@ -28,11 +28,11 @@
 .Sh DESCRIPTION
 .Nm
 is a dynamic host configuration protocol (DHCP) daemon for clients.
-It requests IP configuration information from for example those offered by
+It requests IP configuration information from DHCP servers, e.g.,
 .Xr dhcpd 8 ,
-on interfaces with the
+and uses any such information to configure interfaces on which the
 .Sy AUTOCONF4
-flag set.
+flag is set.
 See
 .Xr hostname.if 5
 and